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Write Your Way Into University – The Personal Statement
By Elaine Millward
The Get Into Uni personal statement writing guide contains systematic instructions
on the techniques to help increase the odds of your application, however this
article contains a short synopsis to writing your way into university. For
most potential students there are some clear reasons why they wish to embark
on university. The single best reason is that the subject area fascinates the
reader. Please read our personal statement writing guide for more information
and access our sample personal statements to read the best sample statements
on the web. http://www.getintouni.com/Free/WritingGuide
This article will offer insight into how you should approach your personal
statement. One of the typical complaints of Admission Officers is that student
personal statements all seem the same; unfortunately, students normally read
a number of sample statements on the internet and automatically write a typical
personal statement from the range of available sample personal statements found
on websites.
It is important to put yourself in the shoes of the Admissions Officer: why
would your personal statement be unique, how are you different from the other
candidates? Primarily you need to decide how you will divide your personal
statement into digestible chucks. The most obvious way is to divide into paragraphs
of 100 words. If you aim for between 500 and 600 words at most, it will help
your admission officer when they have to read thousands of personal statements
to find the perfect student.
So let’s take a look at the way your personal statement should be structured?
If you spent, time analysing our sample personal statements http://www.getintouni.com/Samples
you will see that each paragraph revolves around one particular incident or
the subject area of study. Although the personal statement should logically
flow from start to finish, none the less, unlike a book with a distinctive
story running through it and building up to a climax, a personal statement
is episodic in style and content so each paragraph stands out.
In planning your paragraphs, you must give the Admissions Officer a glow so
they will wish to continue the next section. To illustrate the structure, let’s
take a look at the typical personal statement organisation. The first paragraph
will need to be an exciting and dynamic narrative to capture the reader’s
attention. The subsequent paragraphs should outline why you wish to study for
your particular field followed by a compelling powerful final paragraph with
strong action verbs to give your reader the final push to admit you.
You may find it helpful to prepare a brief synopsis or outline of the way
you see your personal statement developing. It doesn’t have to be very
long or detailed and, like most personal statements structures, you do not
have to stick to it if, as you go along, you find a better route for your journey.
Keep it simple and let it serve merely as a quick reminder of where you’re
going. It might run like this: First memory – seeing my new baby brother
in my mother’s arms. Nursing experience – volunteer in residential
nursing home. Visiting the baby clinic – desires to become a midwife
sufficed. Goals for the future – career ambitions.
It is important to cover whatever period you intend to include in your personal
statement because time spent planning your sequence and the method you feel
happiest with will undoubtedly make the actual writing that much easier for
you.
The biggest problem you will find is finding the topics of discussion in your
personal statement and selecting those topics you want to use and which topics
you wish to leave out. Remember that with any form of writing you are practicing
the art form. Get Into Uni Oxford Educated editors edit the personal statements
for our customers to improve sentences and create a marketing sensation.
A while ago, I was asked to take a critical look at a personal statement,
which spanned the student’s life from age two to eighteen. The personal
statement made gripping reading but was far too long and the student had not
been selective enough in the abundance of material she choose from. The word
count ran to 1,500 words – far too long for a personal statement. The
task of reducing your personal statement can be enthusiastically undertaken,
but the problem is that you need to look at your original brainstormed ideas
to organise your material for the selection process. The only criterion you
need to apply at this stage is this incident of sufficient interest to the
admission officer.
I hope that you agree a powerful beginning is of paramount importance or you
will quickly lose the Admission Officers interest. Then, once having captured
his or her attention, we have to make sure your personal statement ending is
dramatic and in the right place. Each paragraph should be pleasing to the reader
and you need to write a natural conclusion. Chekhov once said the essence of
good style is simplicity. The best advice is therefore, to keep it simple.
Get Into Uni offers students personal statement editing and tips on how you
can get an edge over the competition when applying for university. The website
includes sample personal statements, a free writing guide, and all the information
you need to get into university.
Your personal statement is crucial to your application. Planning your personal
statement is therefore your first step to success. Gain competitive advantage
and order the best editing service on the web. http://www.getintouni.com
Our qualified professional writers will edit your statement to perfection – ensuring
your application is noticed. We recognise that you are unique and, therefore,
you will receive customised advice from your personal writer. Increase your
chances today! Copyright © 2004 Get Into Uni
Elaine is founder of Get Into Uni one the UK’s largest student editing
companies. Get into Uni is the only British based company that can offer Oxbridge
and Ivy League trained editors available 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. These
experienced editors help students make the most of the opportunity the personal
statement. Elaine has focused her energies on helping students’ better
position themselves.
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